Monday, November 17, 2014

Chapter 4: Encounter


I have been moving for almost 4 hours already and I’ve leveled up twice now
And it really is weird that I haven’t encountered any survivors

“Name: Clive       Level: 5
 HP:350/350
Exp %: 15/100
Str: 39                   Dmg: 39 (+ 2)      Class: Novice     Pet: None
Agi: 39                  Def: 35 (+1)
Int: 35                   Luck: 16
Vit: 35”

And there again those bonus stats on my str and agi
Am I an OP character?

Oh well anyways better not dwell on it too much
I mean I’m not really trying to get too absorbed into this
I just want to survived that’s all

As I was talking to myself about my stats I saw a group of 4 people
That was standing in the middle of the street
1 girl and 3 guys



So because I am so smart I sneakily hid behind the car and watched them
Sneak ofcourse
Im not too dumb to just go straight to them
What if they’re psychopaths that are actually enjoying this whole thing?

Who on earth with their right minds will walk in the middle of the street like this?
What if they try to kill me?
I’m pretty sure that they are carrying weapons
Not too sure if I can defend myself against that many

So I observed them first from behind the car
And then I heard a roar from a far
It was very loude]

The group of people were just standing there and then I saw this big black figure
It was the Black wolf that I saw earlier back at the building

And then one of the guys started shouting
“YEAAAAAHHHH!!!! COME ON WOLFIE!!!”
He was tall bald guy with a huge frame
Almost resembled a tank, in game terminologies
Smells like bad news

So I started to get away from the commotion
I don’t want to get caught up to the mess that’s about to happen


As I was about to scurry I heard a voice
“HEYYY!!! You there behind the car!”
The man on the back of the huge guy shouted

“oh shit” I whispered


I slowly turned around and looked at them
I was staring to the guy that called me
Shit this is trouble

“There you are..  Wanna join us? Let’s kill this f**ker”
“Ah, No thanks! I have to go somewhere. Thanks for the offer though”
“Come on! Join us this will be fun!”

Fun?
That thing will kill us all and you’re saying that it’ll be fun?
Is this dude mentally ill?

Then the macho man and the third guy started looking at my direction
It’s like they were threatening me that if I don’t join them they’ll kill me

So yeah, I had no choice but to join them
I walked towards them and asked
“How are we going to kill that thing?”
“Don’t worry about it. We have a Plan. First let me invite you to the party”

I slowly turned and tried to walk away

I wasn’t so sure what level are they because there’re no levels and name floating on the top of their head like the monsters

“Hey! Going somewhere? Come on don’t be such a wuss we can kill that thing”
“Ah yeah”

He said that while showing his gun in front of his pants
What a subtle way to threaten people

With no chance of me from escaping, I just readied myself on the thing that is about to happen
This is a mess
Then the Black wolf arrived in front of us
Back then when I saw it from inside the building,  I almost peed myself
And now that it’s about to kill us
Because of this lunatics I’m about to die

While being drowned with my own thoughts the macho man equipped a shield and a sword from his inventory
Where did he get a shield and a sword? How?
Honestly I thought that he will fight with it bear handed
I’m not a smart man
After the macho man equipped his items other members prepared themselves
The other guy pulled out his sword , the girl pulled out her staff and the last guy pointed his gun at the monster

I’m still quite lost here
Where did they get those weapons?
I mean all I could get is a knife, a kitchen knife, for cooking not for fighting
Well if you think about it I only use knife because it is the most suitable for my skills
It will be strange to use my skill with a bat, I will have to talk to them when all of this end

“Okay! Listen up we’ll do it just like what we did earlier,  Bobcat you will be on the front taking all the hits with your shield, Cycle go cut his legs to reduce his mobility, Lisa support the tank and fighter  and I will go for his eyes”(gun-guy)

Are you guys serious with those names? Only the girl has a normal name
Seems like these people are too into this game

“Ahmmm hey, What will I do”
“Oh right! Just attack and don’t get killed”

Just don’t get killed
Yeah of course that’s what I will do

And then we rushed to the Black wolf altogether
Then black wolf roared at us and made a shockwave


That was really scary
 gun-guy shot the wolf’s eyes and made it go blind in the left eye
the wolf was hurt it rushed towards us and attacked us with its claw but Bobcat blocked the attack

“IS THAT ALL YOU GOT?!”

After blocking the attack Cycle rushed on the left side of the wolf and tried to cut the wolf’s leg from behind
The black wolf jumped to the building and pushed himself and attacked Cycle with its claws
Cycle wasn’t able to parry it, the attack was really fast
Cycle was blasted off to the store and broke the windows 
Cycle received 30% damaged to his HP

“HEAL!”
 Lisa made Cycle’s HP back to 85%, It really is nice to have a healer in your party
It reduces the risk of dying many times over

I also joined the attack wherein I go behind the wolf and attacked from behind

We attacked it with the same pattern as earlier wherein Bobcat was blocking the wolf's attack, Lisa supporting, Cycle and I deal damages and gun-guy taking out the wolf's sight
It kept on for quite a while and then we manage manage reduced its HP to 10%
And then something strange happened

The wolf’s appearance began to change
Its heads started to burst in flames and all of its paws were engulfed with red flames
It was scary but amazing at the same time,  He seemed like the movie that I saw where the guy’s head is engulfed with flames while riding a motor bike

“IT’S COMING!!!”
“BRING IT ON!!!”

The wolf's two heads opened both of its mouth in unison and started charging

“DODGE IT! I CAN’T GUARANTEE YOUR LIVES IF YOU DON’T!”

The wolf release fire from his mouth, It went on for like 5 seconds
Good thing gun-guy was able to blind both of the wolf’s eyes and we were able to dodge it by running behind the wolf
It was pointless , He released a very powerful attack but he couldn’t aim because he is blind

“FINISH IT!”
“”OKAY!””

so we attacked the wolf until it died
And we’re able to get lots of Exp, gold and some items
I didn’t asked them what they got but I got a Combat Knife

Getting a Knife again feels like I’ll be using knives from now on
I actually don’t really care, as long as I can use the weapon properly.  
It would be bad if I got a sword and was not able to wield it.

Come to think of it
 If I got a weapon from a monster, maybe they got it from them also
 They must’ve had a lot of battles from these creatures
Maybe they aren’t lunatics after all
They’ve got confidence because they know how to deal with it
So I asked the gun-guy

“You must have a lot of experience dealing with these huge monsters. At first I honestly thought that you guys are planning to die”
“But it’s the first time we dealt with a boss”
“But where did you get those weapons? Must be from lower level monsters, right?”
“Nope, We got it from the blacksmith”
“Blacksmith?”
“Yeah, from the town”

There is a town?  But this is a city
It was really mind blowing so I asked more questions from him

He told me everything that he knows and it seems like when the apocalypse started the lands transformed

About 1 kilometer south east from here there is a town called Leboa that rose from the ground
Wait that’s near my house

He was there when the town emerged from the ground and he saw the whole thing happened like magic
That night when the city was filled up with blue flames, the ground started shaking but it was a weak tremor and was almost unnoticeable he said

So that’s why I didn’t notice

First thing that happened was the walls formed from nothing then the houses and the NPCs

“NPCs? Are you sure about that?”
“Of course, see the icon that floats on the top of the monster’s head. The NPCs had a similar one and it’s in a [<NPC> Name]  format”

Off all the strange things that happened, the strangest one was the NPCs.
I mean where did they come from?
Are they individually intelligent? Or are they just like NPCs just like in the games wherein if you talk to them they will respond with the same dialogue

“If you really are that curious then go see for yourself. Good timing we will be heading there to make some upgrades"
“Okay, where’s your car?”
“You really don’t know anything, do you?”
“What do you mean?”
“Cars don’t work for some reason, you can start the engine but when you step on acceleration it won’t move. It really is weird but we have to deal with it so we move by foot”

Oh great, I really freaking hate what’s happening
I miss my comfortable chair, my bed and my laptop
I miss my lazy life

“Oh yeah, I still don’t know your name”
“The name’s Maximus”
“Is that your real name?”
“No no no, it’s my IGN.”
“Seriously?”
“Ofcourse,I will tell you something. We have our own ways of coping up with the situation and this is my way so you just have to deal with it. Okay?”
“Yes”

He certainly is right on that part
To survive, you need to have a way of dealing with things
I guess I could learn a thing or two from this guy




45 comments:

  1. It's great!!!
    It's Kinda like [Parasite eve]

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    1. I don't know what parasite eve is.. but thank you :D

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  2. Amazing work hatoken, it's getting better and better by the chapter, lookinv forward for more :D

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  3. wow you are good :D
    looking forward for the next chapters owo

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    1. Really? thank you very much.. \(^ω^\)

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    2. yea owo (or maybe it is just me cause i really like this kind of fantasy story XD ) anyway :3
      will done :3 + looking forward for your next works :D

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  4. Interesting work, Hatoken. Keep it up!

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  5. This is a pretty interesting, by the way you might want to post this in Royal Road, if you want to have more readers and comments such. I read a few fictions there as well, they're good too.

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  6. Was too exciting. Defo need to cut this battle in half, have the mc have a flash back to something. Most other creator's chapters have more filler than interesting action, too much carrot not enough stick hit over the readers' heads. To finish, loved it great work.

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  7. wow, wasn't expecting much, but this is quite amazing. Glad i happened to see this on your site.

    Keep it up!

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  8. keep up the good work. it was enjoying ^^

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  9. I tried my hand at writing, I've only written one chapter so far but please check it out. It's at
    Atarashiiseikai.wordpress.com

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  10. Hurry up next chapter

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  11. Im sorry.. I could only do so much with my free time... I could write my novel if I don't translate and vise versa.. sorry.

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  12. you mind if i designed clive a bit emo? coz there's no explanation on how he looks like yet

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    1. a bit would be good.. but not too much.. :D are you gonna design characters? :D

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    2. oh yeah, btw, yeah, It's me FA Hikao from chapter 1 comment, well, if you doesn't describe anything for Clive than i ought to design it whole myself

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    3. I want him to be a normal looking kinda person, a person who looks like he doesn't care.. sort wanna make a contradiction between his looks and his personality... the rest is up too you... I don't wanna meddle too much with the artist.

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    4. well, instead of starting at full scale like manga, I'll try by being your Novel's illustrator

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    5. http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2014/331/5/7/clive_design_1_by_hikao27-d87ufng.jpg
      the original design actually have ahoge, if you want it, i can add it in

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    6. Yeah.. It would be difficult to turn this into manga.. I would like it to be just a light novel for now at least.

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    7. hmm... could you add a comedic feel to him? haha.. because that's what I had in mind when I created him.. :D

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    8. would be hard, let me try, I never designed a comedic person before, But I'll do my best

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    9. Btw, I found the horned wolf in google http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs7/i/2005/178/4/0/Horned_Wolf_by_baragon.jpg

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    10. Done, so i designed him to be a bit more cheerful http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2014/331/2/2/clive_design_2_by_hikao27-d87x9g3.jpg
      My friend said that comedic person depends on his action though, so I'm not so sure

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    11. it's good.. I like the appearance.. but this is a light novel so you would have to illustrate him in a way an illustration is supposed to be in a light novel.. hahaha.. anyways.. the wolf is almost exactly what I had in mind just need the wolf to be a bit more furry. hehehe

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    13. I need the main design first man, and i believe you want it at a light novelist feel like this http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/265/1/5/shield_hero_s_queen_shield_hero__trash_and_bitch_s_by_laclongquan-d80739x.jpg

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    14. yeah.. as much as I want to give you a design. the thing is I can't hehe... but the first scenario i'd like you to draw was on the first chapter wherein clive was overlooking the city with flames all over from the rooftop... that would be really cool..

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    15. sorry for being too demanding by the way.. hehe

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    16. holy shet, blue flames
      not sure wether to use pixeled flame or just normal flame

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    17. basically flame made of pixels like this http://d2me59s95dy7e.cloudfront.net/cartoons/dd/b1/71/b7/daf165acc3044c7e93186a6249109aa0.jpg

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    18. btw, he is in rooftop only starting at midpoint of ch.2
      just to make sure, are you real hatoken the author or not, i need confirmation from that account with author logo

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    19. a flame like just going into the air.. and then disappearing.. I'll make a rought sketch... right that was for chapter 2 ..... and for chapter 1 .. I guess the part where they were shocked when they saw the wolf.. Im really hatoken.. I'll do a shoutout after im done translating.

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  14. isnt there a mana or something?? hahaha well just asking

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    1. nope.. they're just dealing with CD... I kinda picked up SAO .. haha.. It's a mixed of many stories.

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    2. well its alryt hahahaha... nice LN keep up the good work sir!! gonna kill some wolf!! hahah good luck!

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    3. how do the healing abilities work without a mana system?

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